Beneath the tranquil facade of idyllic ocean waves, a deadly undertow often awaits an unsuspecting swimmer. Until one experiences the unseen force, it is difficult to comprehend its power. Strong swimmers tell of the exhausting battle of endurance while treading water or swimming parallel to the shore until they break free. We have all heard stories with tragic endings where a rip claimed one life or several others who attempted to help.
Sidney Poitier shares an eye-opening testimony to an undertow’s power in his autobiography, The Measure of a Man. The force often grabs without warning, and it leaves a lasting impression on all who experience it, even if watching from afar.
Life presents its own undertows. Many people show a calm facade while struggling against personal undertows. An unseen battle rages against the current of life while they smile and assure the world that all is fine. Sometimes they emerge and never speak of their personal trials. Some teach others by sharing their experiences, while others realize they’re in too deep and ask for help. There are some who feel overwhelmed and lose the will to endure the struggle.
The world lost a special soul this week to an undertow that overwhelmed him. We will miss you, Franklin Mayorga, of the little pueblito of Bejuco, Nandayure, Costa Rica.
Ironically, I recently rediscovered this poem that touched me when I was young. It seems appropriate as an ending to this epistle.
THE UNDERTOW by Carrie B. Morgan
You hadn’t ought to blame a man fer things he hasn’t done,
For books he hasn’t written or fer fights he hasn’t won;
The waters may look placid on the surface all aroun’,
Yet there may be an undertow a-keepin’ of him down.
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Since the days of Eve and Adam, when the fight of life began,
It ain’t been safe my bretheren, fer to lightly judge a man;
He may be trying faithful fer to make his life a go,
And yet his feet get tangled in the treacherous undertow.
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He may not lack in learnin’ and he may not want for brains;
He may be always workin’ with the patientest of pains,
And yet go unrewarded, an’ my friends, how can we know
What weights he may have climbed to but fer the undertow?
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You’ve heard the Yankee story of the hen’s nest with a hole,
An’ how the hen kept layin’ eggs with all her might and soul,
Yet never got a settin; not a single egg I trow;
The hen was simply kickin’ ‘gainst a hidden undertow.
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There’s holes in lots of hen’s nests, and you’ve got to peep below
To see the eggs a-rollin’ where they hadn’t ought to go.
Don’t blame a man fer failin’ to achieve a laurel crown
Until you’re sure the undertow ain’ draggin’ of him down.
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From Tony’s Scrap Book, 1940- 41 edition (Anthony Wons)
Wow! You found it. Perseverance is a wonderful thing and I’m so glad that yours has been rewarded. And thank you so much for letting me know of your success. Great post. Joyce
Hi Joyce!
Yes, thanks! I was so glad when I came across the poem again, although it made me miss holding a copy of “Tony’s Scrap Book” in my hands. I’ll should work on acquiring some of the old editions! Z
Beautiful picture!!
thanks! it’s of playa rosada near limon nicaragua, though it does not – to my knowledge – have an undertow. z
Very thought provoking-great photos, blog and poem. I am curious, what happened to the man from Bejuco?
Richard
hi richard. – i’m glad you enjoyed the post. no new details have come my way since the news of his death, though depression was one of his battles. z
Just a few words to tell you that you are in our mind (Lise and mine).
Your “undertow text” is so true…
I am afraid the man from Bejuco was a friend of Marie and Hank’s too ? I hope they are not too sad…
I wish you all the best, in all your projects.
Hola lovely Helene (and Lise!)
Si, Franklin was an icon of the area, and his death caught everyone by surprise. His spirit will forever be a part of that community.
How is my multi-talented star student? I hope that all is going well for you and Lise!
Siempre,
Z
“a deadly undertow often awaits an unsuspecting swimmer…” – oh yes, Lisa, I had some bad experiences swimming myself in the Rhine river – and: I rescued 13 people during several years who tried to swim risky, one case difficult because two boys grabbed themselves in panic (underwater) – for one the help was nearly senseless: after the accident his brain was damaged – he couldn’t speak and walk no more …
oh wow.. what an amazing comment! 13 people were able to live out their destiny because you stepped up to bat and lived out yours! you are an angel, and those families probably still talk about, ‘do you remember when….’
thank you so much for your comment!
z
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What a beautiful tribute. The photographs and the poetry have moved me deeply. Just lovely.
thank you, dear myra! i read that poem years ago in one of my father’s 1940’s issue of Tony’s Scrap Book. unsuccessfully tried to find it over the past few years and finally came across a hand-scrawled copy in my notes from long ago!! it was like finding a golden nugget! i am glad you appreciated it!
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So true! An important reminder.
thank you; i have found that many people are way too quick to judge others. we’re all here to have empathy and help each other along! z
so touching! I had to read this poem twice, thank you for posting, it’s so powerfu! 😉
you are so very welcome, and your posts are equally powerful. i am so glad that we’ve crossed cyber paths! you’re a very strong woman and have lots of wisdom to share with others.
I have been reading your posts now for about one month. I just moved to Manta. The undertow metaphor is quite astonishing…going through one now but will survive😀….I have studied art for many years and would love to get involved, in-touch with people and events near here that speak to the soul like you do. Can you keep me informed? Thanks so much.
Ted
hey ted, – i am so sorry that my comment to you went awol! i was in mindo at that time, and i’m not sure, aside from slow connections perhaps, but here goes again! i hope that you’re still working on your art, visiting the wonderful museum system of manabi, etc.
t
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I strong and telling poem. We should never judge another man or woman without knowing the undertow they are fighting, should we? Or without having walked a mile in their shoes. The undertow can make or break.
Yes, and difficult times are often great catalysts that propel us into new directions….
a poignant tribute. so many struggle with unseen undertows…
how interesting that of the hundreds of posts, you’d see this one about the undertow. the poem has always been one of my favorites – and no, we never know what invisible undertow others might be fighting.